This week M1 literacy we had to describe our teacher who is miss Riessman. Her is my description hope you enjoy. we only had 2 days to finish it.
After we finished that we read a book called the big game and we had to do a summary on it.
After we finished that we read a book called the big game and we had to do a summary on it.
Hi Alex, I am pleased to see you exploring the use of simile in your descriptive writing. Next time it would be great to see some variation such as one simile, some specific adjectives using the describe bubble and perhaps an anecdote to help form a picture of your character in your readers mind. Mrs P
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