This week we have had to write about participating and contributing we have to write a poster on what we do in this school to participate and contribute
Kia Ora! My name is Maddiosn I am a year 7 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
WOW! AMAZING WORK!
I think that this is an outstanding blog and I understood everything. I think that it is really good to participate and try new things otherwise you will never know if you good or not. I think that it is an awesome thing to share about this to let others know that they should try.
I think that every body can use some type of feedback. I have a few ideas for you. I think that first it would be a good idea to write more over top over your blog saying why you did this and what you want improvement on. A good idea is to ask what others have done to try new things or give examples in your blog.
Hey Alex, My name is Chloe I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I think this blog post amazing and understandable. Next time you could write a longer description to improve this blog? I think it's so important to try new interesting things, because if you don't then you might not have anything you like and you would be super bored.
Why did you participate in the sports? Next time you could try a website called piktochart which improves your blog. Maybe you could also make the title on that picture smaller so it fits in? You could also draw that picture of those kids together yourself? Try something new. Make sure you use Capitals on your title.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddiosn I am a year 7 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
WOW!
AMAZING WORK!
I think that this is an outstanding blog and I understood everything. I think that it is really good to participate and try new things otherwise you will never know if you good or not. I think that it is an awesome thing to share about this to let others know that they should try.
I think that every body can use some type of feedback. I have a few ideas for you. I think that first it would be a good idea to write more over top over your blog saying why you did this and what you want improvement on. A good idea is to ask what others have done to try new things or give examples in your blog.
Keep up the amazing work!
Kind regards
,Maddison
Hey Alex,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I think this blog post amazing and understandable. Next time you could write a longer description to improve this blog? I think it's so important to try new interesting things, because if you don't then you might not have anything you like and you would be super bored.
Why did you participate in the sports? Next time you could try a website called piktochart which improves your blog. Maybe you could also make the title on that picture smaller so it fits in? You could also draw that picture of those kids together yourself? Try something new. Make sure you use Capitals on your title.
Kind regards
- Chloe