Welcome back
Welcome to term 2. Hope you have had a good holiday and are enjoying being back at school. In literacy we are learning to read for information. (: This week we have been writing down notes of what we know about plastic here are my notes.
Hi Alex, welcome back to Term 2 in Mamaku hub.It is great to have you all back at school. Wow what alot of prior knowledge you have about plastic. Your notes are clear and easy to read. Next time don't forget to include your WALT in your reflection. Keep up the great work. Mrs P
ReplyDeleteHi Alex, welcome back to Term 2. I am Letisha and I am from Tautoro School. I really like the way that you have set our your document about plastic. It is cool how you have explained to us what plastic can make. Wow I can't believe how much prior knowledge you have that is based on plastic. This is good example can't wait for more. To improve I think that you should tell your audience or readers what your actually learning. You can explain it in many ways. But to me I think that the best way to do this is by writing your WALT which means We are learning to or another way to write it is WALHT which means we are learning how to..... Apart from that I really like your writing it is just so amazing and informing to your audience and maybe just make your writing a bit clearer to read thanks blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex, My name is Erika and I go to Saint Patrick's School. I think its cool that you have many different facts about plastic and it was interesting to read how many things plastic helps make. Another thing I thought was helpful was the way you laid your notes out it made it much easier to read. A thing you might want to include next time is why you needed notes on plastic. I'm curious to find out what you are doing or learning that involves plastic. :)
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